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A Valetines Surrender

A Valentines poem from me to you
Came from the heart of someone true
I searched among wild flowers that grow
To find sweet scented rose to know

Sweet Valentine may you be mine?
A bursting kiss from your Divine
To blossom now and be with me
Swift beating heart to be set free

I ask you now oh sweetest heart
Please come with me and not depart
For one like you I cannot find!
Your loving soul and caring mind

Is that a YES I hear somehow
My ears do crave my heart says WOW
For you are my fun and I'm yours too
I only want to be with you

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

Charming little verse

Ann of Norway You woo you woo fair sir with grace and 'tis your due to find her mirth and mingle with the perfumes of the flowers the delight of spring and summer bowers hidden beneath their cover smooth as silk you drink the maiden's sweetly flowing milk. I found the WOW a little out of place in the context therefore! For YOU'RE my fun? Maybe. Ann
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Oh to be with the one you

Oh to be with the one you love...I hope this comes true for you. Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Stu

I really thought this one was sweet ... ah to have a poet write me romantic verse lol sigh ... love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x