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judyanne
judyanne
Feb 27, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A Truth

When tomorrow’s dreams

are yesterday’s facts.

When tomorrow’s aims

are yesterday’s acts.

When tomorrow’s plans

are yesterday’s deeds.

When tomorrow’s hopes

are yesterday’s needs.

When tomorrow’s vision

is yesterday’s way.

Then today we grow

— judyanne, Feb 27, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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Critiques

mand

mand

16 years 3 months ago

past, present, future, never

past, present, future, never stop dreaming, planning, hopeing, keep the vision in front of you, when we see them happen we grow. A positive poem for the past, present and future. Excellent. Love Mand.
M

Mariposa

16 years 3 months ago

So true, so true

So often we worry about the future, then it's over and it's the past: which we hopefully learn from!
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Nice to meet you Mariposa.

Nice to meet you Mariposa. Yes we really only have the moment, and even that we cannot hold. Thanks for visiting - I'll call your way soon Judy
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Ann of NorwayDon’t put off

Ann of Norway Don't put off today what you can put off till the day after tomorrow, we say for fun here, as that's more like what it turns out to be ha ha! A neat twist you have created dear Judyanne, with the feeling of a riddle right down the middle while its out on either side where the mind has never tried to be. Ana Nya with love to you Judyanne.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Love to you too

Love to you too Ana-Nya. I'm always putting off until next week!! lol Judy
M

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Great this one

what a way to start my day very nice dear Jayne love magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Ephraim Crud has started a

Ephraim Crud has started a trend. Looks like I'll have to answer to Jayne!!!! And I hope Seren, when she returns Doesn't mind I've stolen half of her name. xx Love to you Magics. How's the NEW COMPUTER? Judy
S

sutton

16 years 3 months ago

LOVED IT.. MAY I SUGGEST AN

LOVED IT.. MAY I SUGGEST AN ENDING???.....WELL I WILL ANY WAY...." THEN TODAY WE GROW AND TOMORROW WE'LL KNOW".. SORRY IT'S A POEM I DID'T WANT TO END.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Sutton. I’ll

Thanks Sutton. I'll contemplate that ending, thanks so much for the suggestion and your kind words. judy