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Similarity in tears.

Salt water tears
that fall from our eyes
bring us to thoughts
unhealthy for our minds
and when we separate
it leaves a space.
Humanity is difference
it fills us all
but we all have a similarity
it lives in our tears
that we all cry.
We all get bruises
everyone gets hurt
That's the thing
that keeps us all one.
Cause we all cry
no matter a reason,
The Salt water tears
Fall.

— ANC1996, Feb 26, 2010

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Region, Country: Florida, ZZC

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Shakespeare, Homer.

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ifoundaplace

ifoundaplace

16 years 3 months ago

Adri

I like this piece a lot. It's the truth. Good job Dani (:
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bella1

16 years 3 months ago

love it!!!!!!!

I like this one another awsome peice adri love it!!!!!!
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Great one Adri very good

Very nice here bravo my adri gal- keep up on the writing, you are getting better each time I see... love,magics02 xoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.