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Feb 26, 2010
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Similarity in tears.
Salt water tears
that fall from our eyes
bring us to thoughts
unhealthy for our minds
and when we separate
it leaves a space.
Humanity is difference
it fills us all
but we all have a similarity
it lives in our tears
that we all cry.
We all get bruises
everyone gets hurt
That's the thing
that keeps us all one.
Cause we all cry
no matter a reason,
The Salt water tears
Fall.
that fall from our eyes
bring us to thoughts
unhealthy for our minds
and when we separate
it leaves a space.
Humanity is difference
it fills us all
but we all have a similarity
it lives in our tears
that we all cry.
We all get bruises
everyone gets hurt
That's the thing
that keeps us all one.
Cause we all cry
no matter a reason,
The Salt water tears
Fall.
— ANC1996, Feb 26, 2010
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ifoundaplace
16 years 3 months ago
Adri
bella1
16 years 3 months ago
love it!!!!!!!
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Great one Adri very good
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
this is possibly all poetry can be.