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THE CRUISE
THE CRUISE
We sailed their yacht to paradise,
At least that’s what it seemed.
White coral sand, blue sea, green palms,
The place we all had dreamed.
We’d had our plans made for a while,
To steal their yacht and run;
We meant the pair no harm - I swear,
But the old man pulled a gun.
Overpowered and beat up some,
Now both too scared to speak-
(They can’t be found, both had to drown)
So their lifeboat sprung a leak.
Jed and Steve stayed up on deck
While I turned in below.
From troubled dreams, wild cries and screams
I woke in a horror show.
I heard the tearing, ripping sound
Of flesh being torn from bone
The other two, the old man’s crew,
Were gone - I was alone.
I tried to hide from killer, but
The old man found the place.
With rotten breath that stank of death
Skin hanging from his face.
All that took place ten years ago,
I’m skipper now, for life
We sail the seas, just him and me
Still looking for his wife…….
Critiques
Tam the Chanter
16 years 3 months ago
cruise
jetz
16 years 3 months ago
Perfect rhyme and rhythm to
Tam the Chanter
16 years 3 months ago
cruise
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Another good one Tam
Tam the Chanter
16 years 3 months ago
cruise
greeneyes
16 years 3 months ago
I loved this! Wow, this was
Tam the Chanter
16 years 3 months ago
cruise