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Feb 25, 2010
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Tribal dawn, part one
Up the Sound on a sunny daywas a tribe of native folkon a river out of the wayin the Northwest, its remote
Down the Stoluck-wa-mish valleyfollowing its crooked riveryou can hear a calling rallyshouting young the trigger
Greeting hands and smileswelcome you to a potlucksome come from many milesa celebration is all it took
Tan faces filled with laughterstrong arms opened widenew beginnings forever afterbig sense of community pride
The elders stand to the backmore reserved than the restpossessing what young still lackall dressed in their fancy best
hands out to the newest bridepretty as the morning suncome up the river with the tideno doubt she would be the one
Coming to offer her medical skillbut they all know why she cameit was known over land and hillshe was a princess with a name
Lay-lo-la was of old native bloodcome to meet the young Chiefand if they felt there could be lovewould marry, as was their belief
The Stoluck-wa-mish people beamedexcited for what was to comethis was the tribes biggest dreamplanned for a long time by some
With her came a name and graceher medicinal skills well knownso gladly they all make her spacehoping she might feel at home
There will be much for all to doin the days that are to followa bit of match making for twoa bright future dawns tomorrow
Julie
D.D.
2/25/2010
Still working on this, may be continued in a chapter version. Place names may change.
— DawningDaytripper, Feb 25, 2010
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judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Verse 2 line 3 ‘you can
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
As I love you Judy, Yes you
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
A NEW
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
I am honored by your review.
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I agree with Kal. This is
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Rosina, I am so
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
O ya ya ya o ya ya ya o ya ya ya! Listen?
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Well I am off to get my new