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Feb 25, 2010
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Mind War
You put you encharge and now you’re gone,
So you’ll never hear the rattling gun.
You’ll never enjoy the silent song,
That I wrote for you before we begun.
Although you later,
Tore me apart;
You made me happier
And stole my heart.
I’ve taken the bullet,
I’ll dodge the next.
I steal back my heart
And lock away the regrets.
You’ll never be sorry because you’ll never know
That from my mind, atleast, you’ll never go.
So you’ll never hear the rattling gun.
You’ll never enjoy the silent song,
That I wrote for you before we begun.
Although you later,
Tore me apart;
You made me happier
And stole my heart.
I’ve taken the bullet,
I’ll dodge the next.
I steal back my heart
And lock away the regrets.
You’ll never be sorry because you’ll never know
That from my mind, atleast, you’ll never go.
— evie.haywood, Feb 25, 2010
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xena465
16 years 3 months ago
You have your memories and
evie.haywood
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you, there were some
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I look forward to reading it
evie.haywood
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you Annie. Some wise
evie.haywood
16 years 3 months ago
I’ll do my upmost. I’ve