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Mind War

You put you encharge and now you’re gone,
So you’ll never hear the rattling gun.
You’ll never enjoy the silent song,
That I wrote for you before we begun.
Although you later,
Tore me apart;
You made me happier
And stole my heart.
I’ve taken the bullet,
I’ll dodge the next.
I steal back my heart
And lock away the regrets.
You’ll never be sorry because you’ll never know
That from my mind, atleast, you’ll never go.
— evie.haywood, Feb 25, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

You have your memories and

You have your memories and they sound like nice ones...so hold on to them. Rosina xena465
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evie.haywood

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you, there were some

Thank you, there were some lovely times. :) I'm about to post another that I wrote about a month after this one. I find there's quite a significatn chang ein attitude.