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Feb 24, 2010
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Blood Hound
You wouldn't let up
No, not until I bled
You couldn't stop
Nothing could keep you fed
A rabid dog is what you are
All you want is blood letting war
I've given you as much as I dare
Blood pulsing through my wounds
The worst is the gash you left on my heart
You pulled me apart with your teeth
You were human once, not anymore
You stole my heart when you ran, theif
They call you a disturbed young man
I call you a messed up bloodhound
I need to stop you but, not sure I can
Your a bloodhound on the loose
You get off on the blood of your prey
Their love for you, their fear of you
It's like a drug, your addicted
A blood crazed bloodhound is you
What to do with you?
I don't even know where you are
But, i know your out there waiting for me
Me to slip, you to shread my heart and throat
Bloodhound is your true form
Can't remember you being in the norm
Theres no human to you
So, those ones who loved you
Are your play things
Their your prey
I didn't want to be
But, there was not much to do
So, I'm done hiding
Come on lets get this done
We'll fight to the death
The dog fight has begun
We rip into each other
Striking the blows that hurt the most
Playing with each others hearts
Until we both drop from exhaustion
Nothing is forgiven and a lot is lost
But, you are human again
Your bloody and crying in my arms
The dog fight is retired, at least for a while
So you lay there in my arms
The big bloodhound is no more
It's just my love, scared and bleeding
I held you tight to my chest
Your whimpering into my neck
And I know that I've tamed the bloodhound
We'll get through this somehow
We both peacefully fell asleep together
On the forest floor, battle ground
The moon playing across our blood
But, it doesn't matter
We're together again
As I slowly drift off
I hear you say what I was praying you'd say
I'm sorry and I love you Alana
I am at peace now, to the dream world i go
Love,
Alice
No, not until I bled
You couldn't stop
Nothing could keep you fed
A rabid dog is what you are
All you want is blood letting war
I've given you as much as I dare
Blood pulsing through my wounds
The worst is the gash you left on my heart
You pulled me apart with your teeth
You were human once, not anymore
You stole my heart when you ran, theif
They call you a disturbed young man
I call you a messed up bloodhound
I need to stop you but, not sure I can
Your a bloodhound on the loose
You get off on the blood of your prey
Their love for you, their fear of you
It's like a drug, your addicted
A blood crazed bloodhound is you
What to do with you?
I don't even know where you are
But, i know your out there waiting for me
Me to slip, you to shread my heart and throat
Bloodhound is your true form
Can't remember you being in the norm
Theres no human to you
So, those ones who loved you
Are your play things
Their your prey
I didn't want to be
But, there was not much to do
So, I'm done hiding
Come on lets get this done
We'll fight to the death
The dog fight has begun
We rip into each other
Striking the blows that hurt the most
Playing with each others hearts
Until we both drop from exhaustion
Nothing is forgiven and a lot is lost
But, you are human again
Your bloody and crying in my arms
The dog fight is retired, at least for a while
So you lay there in my arms
The big bloodhound is no more
It's just my love, scared and bleeding
I held you tight to my chest
Your whimpering into my neck
And I know that I've tamed the bloodhound
We'll get through this somehow
We both peacefully fell asleep together
On the forest floor, battle ground
The moon playing across our blood
But, it doesn't matter
We're together again
As I slowly drift off
I hear you say what I was praying you'd say
I'm sorry and I love you Alana
I am at peace now, to the dream world i go
Love,
Alice
— Alice Ember, Feb 24, 2010
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Critiques
arja
16 years 3 months ago
A brave write!
Alice Ember
16 years 3 months ago
alright
Alice Ember
16 years 3 months ago
?
arja
16 years 3 months ago
correction: “Until we both
Alice Ember
16 years 3 months ago
Okay