Congregation of the Zero

We are the swelling Congregation of the Zero

Rebelling in our spelling it as Hero

For never yelling at the crowd

For dwelling with a silence, loud

Reaction to our selling pleas

Served with a most compelling please

Our hoped bestselling line

Though it may truly be repelling, smelling

Deserves at least a yelling at in time.

— Clem, Feb 24, 2010

Critiques

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

Perhaps the meaning was unclear to some,

tell me if I got it wrong Fuck off consumerism! Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Clem

Just Smiles from me I loved your poem ... keep em coming ... the message I got was that no matter how smelly and disgusting everyone deserves to have their right to voice or word lol funny how people take different things from a poem eh ? kind regards Jayne-Chloe

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 4 months ago

Again The Christian May take away More Then The Read

Brimestone and Fire are quite Smelly and It should Not be Our Best selling Point I believe You Know what I mean, But again a scerete Meaning to your Peom for certain people. May be shinning through, But Not Many will see the message if they aren't looking even If there was One, or an intended one. I seen One, another Nicely writen poem, IF your intenions are there they a being received By at least One. If Not I may have finaly reach a point where I see Goodness hiding everywhere, It may be just Me, But Me thinks Not Matey, Sinbad the Sailor Man/Donnie

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

ohmy friend, you know my viewpoint by now

Religion = bad, spirituality = good. All religions are power based priests telling people what to do. Spirituality is a personal choice of right/wrong integrity etc. It is taking personal responsibility. Cheers, Jess, “The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue.” Emma Goldman

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