Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

under bald pate


under
bald pate

nowhere
I satin
a chair
dune
my hair;
now I ask you,
is that fair?

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

More from this author

Comments

A

Arrow

16 years 2 months ago

Welcome back!

Making excellent use of visuals and sounds - enjoyed this little puzzle and think dunes and satins are excellent double images. I had a little trouble with "dune" initially. It will be easier recognized by Southerners, I think.
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Chuck

You are a sight for sore eyes my friend ... you have been missed soooo much I left messages on your profile wondering how you were ... and you come back bearing poetry ... woooooooooooohoooooooooooooo welcome back hun ... and your name still makes me smile (huggles) and much love Jayne-Chloe x x x x
Mark

Mark

16 years 2 months ago

maybe so

bald pate ? what is that, Chuck? Went a lookin' but all the dictionaries screamed at me, the only thing I know is incarceration of a sort?? But on the poetry - whatever it took :) regards, Mark "I do not walk the earth and eat out of dumpsters, I'm not a bum, I'm beat."
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

Wondrous welcomes!

So great to see you posting, Chuck, you've been sorely missed. And a suitably pithy, clever return it is too. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Chuck

It is so good to see you back again! I'm so excited! I'm losing my hair, too! Always, Cat