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Searching For A Pot Of Gold

One night I was taking a walk,
In the forest near my house,
When suddenly i heard a sound,
I thought it was a mouse.
But when I took a look,
What did I see?
A tiny man with a big green hat,
Giggling at me with glee.
"Listen here Lassie,"
He said to me,
"I want to play a game,"
"Win or lose ,I promise you,
You will never be the same."
I stared down at this little guy,
Dressed in green from head to toe,
I did not trust this trickster,
So I turned so I could go.
"Hey," he yelled , as I walked away,
You can win my pot of gold,
Think of all the things you could do,
The treasures to behold,"
"All you have to do is catch me,"
Then it all belongs to you,"
"Hurry up before I change my mind,"
"Tell me what you're going to do."
" I am not a fool, shorty,"
"I said to my little friend,"
"This is a game I can not win,
A game that will never end."
He looked up at me with disappointment,
"Oh, I wanted to play,"
"But if you don't, I guess ill go,
Hope you have a good day."
With a tip of his hat he was gone,
And to me this was just fine,
I had no desire to chase a treasure,
I knew would never be mine.
You see you can not catch a leprechaun,
You would be chasing till the day you died,
He would never of had to give me his gold,
i knew that he had lied.
Always search for you own treasure,
You hold the power in your hand,
Life is too short , so start now
Before the hour glass runs out of sand.
Make life what you can,while your still here,
With the your own treasures that you find,
And remember that when you leave this earth,
You have to leave it all behind,





 

— greeneyes, Feb 24, 2010

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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yenti

yenti

16 years 3 months ago

Naome

Or anyone whoe's name I don't know, the colour green from your Eyes to little men running around trying to tempt you, a lovely story well told and with good reason, "Chasing Rainbows" is the old expression for doing that, maybe it came from another type of heritage but tells the same tale,to stop chasing something you cannot have or catch, Yours Ian.T
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

And there you are entertaining we children-at-heart

Ann of Norway And there you are entertaining we children-at-heart with your sweet tales, we almost feel we have seen this little man, he is so vividly alive in your description, full of pranks and you were wise not to follow him, you might change into one yourself dear Greeneyes. "He would never of had to give me his gold," He would never have had to... or cut out the 'of had to' completely. "while your still here," you're Love form Ann
SR

Stuart Reiss

16 years 3 months ago

The luck of the Irish

Really lovely light hearted write of the little people whom we see when our minds are open and our eyes are closed... Lovely write with a lot of time and effort Green Eyes Best regards Stu :-)
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Leprechauns are tricky

Leprechauns are tricky little fellows and you were right in not buying into his game, clever girl. I really like this - a couple of 'typos' “But if you don’t, I guess ill go,' (should be I'll) 'He would never of had to give me his gold' ('of' should be 'have') 'With the your own treasures that you find,' (take out the 'the') Don't mean to be 'picky', I'm sure not perfect - just trying to help with the presentation, I hope you don't mind. I absolutely love this little story and the moral message at the end. lol Judy
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 3 months ago

Sure and begorrah

Very very funny and yet a moral told within. Having searched all Eire for the little guy I see he's got a flight and to America did fly late the other night. Keep him there the bugger that he is! The plight of decent Irish folk A better life can live. Laughter all the way Just one suggestion on the line Before the hour glass runs out of sand ( empties ...as a replacement word for runs out) Best Wishes Seabhac