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Feb 24, 2010
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Verse 14
was this life to end with a sigh?
now the world came too furious and the sun had sleep,
another hour had past and just minutes to say goodbye,
and breathe my last farewell then kiss my death,
its hard to see this love weep and die,
but its harder to die so weak..
now the world came too furious and the sun had sleep,
another hour had past and just minutes to say goodbye,
and breathe my last farewell then kiss my death,
its hard to see this love weep and die,
but its harder to die so weak..
— whitescatter, Feb 24, 2010
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Moyo
16 years 3 months ago
beautiful
Nicole Michaels
16 years 2 months ago
CRIT