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the street from a cereal box
they imposed on me
two little bullet holes
the dearest reasons
to become real
to dance into something a bit less
appropriate than a smiles
lifeless comedy, and pardon me
I don't live there
embattled fists raging with their lack of reluctance
spilled across the split open street
those flowers as red as a tea rose
provoking nothing less then a box of cereal
spilled across the impeccability's of white linen
it was a small unimpressive little war
a few pop - pop - pops,
those ticklish insinuations
staccato adagios poorly aimed at life
we expect
to generally murder them selves before
morning into a neat page six
and he was my son
the flies buzzed the pawnshops
to find some inexpensive cutlery
blood is a blind business
the kind that buys your manhood a dream or two
down on main st when opportunity sharpens itself
like a last resort
I promise you less then a responsible smile
maybe a full time job,
and a means to fill some assumption
of America like the cigarette man used to ride off into
before that cancer problem got in the way
and he was my son
and you believed me because I played your song
the one where you got what you wanted
without the proposition of lifeless sirens
and stabilizing heart monitors
Critiques
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Oh bump and jump and throw it about the words are so lively to
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
So much imagination in this
Mariposa
16 years 3 months ago
I "see real" perceptiveness in this
Mariposa
16 years 3 months ago
By the way, see real was a pun on cereal
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Barry