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A DAY AND A NIGHT

A DAY AND A NIGHT The world would have been flat One long day without the night If a rotating earth was not to be Imagine the world wide weariness A day, by a half, is laid to rest When the sun sets in the west Man, charmed by it, takes a respite From the flurry, fanning the flames His actions continue, but shifted To the realities of the dreamland Collapsing place, space and time As he travels through his mind Secrets of past, long buried, revealed To fine-tune the future from the present The night has its many exploits, to rest And to unlock the nature of self
— t. reflexion, Feb 23, 2010

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 3 months ago

Hello T...

This is one of the loveliest poems I have the pleasure of reading... in a long time. Your words carry a lucidity, and an exquisite insight; like a meditation I can merge with. I love the Dreamtime, and I love your poem. Simply beautiful, T. Gentle regards, Raven.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years ago

Sorry for the late reply...

Thank you for the comments. I found out that the duality of a day in day and night were designed for renewal of self and the entire system we call our world. Though, some people see the night as a cover for bad things, its usefulness far out-weighs the negative. Best wishes. T.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years ago

Thank you...

Though my response to your comments comes late, I appreciate your encouraging remarks always. Thank you and best wishes. T.