Drowing In Sorrow

You look my way,
But you do not see,
The pain and torment,
You bring to me.

I scream my sorrow,
To a stone deaf ear,
For my words are those,
Which you refuse to hear.

I could drown in the tears,
That stream down my face,
I am no longer myself,
I have fallen from grace.

Once I was strong,
But now I am weak,
Once I was prideful,
Now I am shameful and meek.

You did this to me,
You are the devil for sure,
You have tarnished a love,
That was forever and pure.

I fucking hate this poem,
So mushy and sad,
This is not who I am,
So now I am mad.

I like tale about dragons,
This bullshit is not me,
This is the very last love poem,
That my friends at Neo will see.

So goodbye to the sadness,
I have stories to tell,
Yes I still love you,
But go straight to hell!

— greeneyes, Feb 23, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

Critiques

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

With a sad meloncholy rhythm you drowned me in your sorrow ... your best write to date my friend ... simply poetry and poet is thus born a wise lady said to me once love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x

greeneyes

16 years 3 months ago

thank you so much Jayne no

thank you so much Jayne no one comments, good or critical, mean as much to me as yours do. Love, Elizabeth

Bonitaj

16 years 3 months ago

ah green eyes

haven't we all been there done that! But yes! like a phoenix you will rise again. Just love that sad little child of yours and let her vent a bit! i.e. don't be so hard on yourself - this too shall pass :) Bonita j

U K Atiyodi

16 years 3 months ago

Sorrow

Kudos! A true poet. What you have said is only for poem's sake, I think. Continue with this simple style of writing. Don't be depressed in real life. I praise your talent as a poet.

greeneyes

16 years 3 months ago

thanks to everyone

Candlewitch

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

I enjoyed your simple rhyming, it fairly flows off the tongue. I am always in awe of your writing skills. Always, Cat

greeneyes

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you both it means alot

Thank you both it means alot to hear from those I admire. Elizabeth

lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Bravo

Encore, brilliant and boy do I understand. A well written bitch hun. Title missing an n. Love Lyz. Not your recent but I had missed this one. XX