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The Doll

It’s called a High Care Facility.

A place where people go

when stroke or heart or Alzheimer’s

has stolen life’s libido.

Those ladies with cognition woes

can sometimes fret a bit.

They worry about their families

and think they have young kids.

 

In the homes for elderly ladies

some dwell in younger times.

And some OTs think maybe

a doll would be just fine

to keep them feeling useful.

And as something about to chatter

a child with big blue eyes might

help them settle better.

 

The therapist requested funds.

Four hundred dollars clear.

She said that some would benefit

from having a dolly near.

The boss thought it excessive

but as she couldn’t see a way

to veto transfer of the cash,

the young girl had her say.

 

Some staff, they were against it.

They thought it condescending.

Most even went so far as to

complain it was demeaning.

But the therapist was of the new school

and determined these things work.

And so without another word

the blue-eyed babe was bought.

 

The manager immediately

could see something was wrong.

She sat the doll, she laid the doll

but its big eyes watched her own.

“Its eyes don’t close,” she told the girl

who’d taken this giant leap.

“How will those ladies settle

when they can’t get the baby to sleep?”

 

Whoever they would give it to -

Peggy, Louise, Ingrid -

the doll just lay and stared at them

no matter what they did.

It was quite off-putting for the dears

as the manager had known.

The infant would not slumber.

Its eyes were always open.

 

They offered it to Mary Jane.

She pulled out most its hair.

They took it round to Nancy Lee

who really didn’t care.

Granny Sneet was terrified

and wouldn’t look its way.

And the manager knew too well

those eyes had had their say.

 

Not one lady wanted it.

They left it where it lay

in the foyer of the nursing home

and it stayed there day by day.

Until the time a visitor

into the crib did peep.

“Oh what a lovely little one,”

she said to Granny Sneet.

 

Granny shrugged her frail thin bones

and muttered under breath.

What she said God only knows.

One can only guess.

She wrung her hands around and round

and sniffed her pointed nose.

“I don’t know why they keep it there.

It is quite dead you know.”

 

— judyanne, Feb 22, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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Critiques

xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

This is a serious but fun

This is a serious but fun poem...I love it...Perhaps they should've gave them a doll from the 1950's. These dolls, I remember, there eyes closed when they were lay flat and they had lovely long eye-lashes too. On a serious note. I don't have any elderly people in a home. But I do know the love and care that are given to in most of these homes, although there are a few that don't give them the care they need, infact, some of these old people are neglected and abused. Rosina xena465
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Rosina.I have worked

Thanks Rosina. I have worked in the aged industry for thirty years or more now. I have worked in some lovely places and I have seen some terrible places. But everywhere there are wonderful people looking after the elderly. We all see the sadness alzheimers delivers to the families of these souls, and feel in our hearts for them. However, those with the disease are beyond the worry and one thing we have found is that we can either laugh or cry at the things they say and do. We prefer to laugh. Cheers Judy
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

I could feel this well, I

I could feel this well, I had a brief venture in to elderly care. I worked for a highend Alzhiemers facility. It was new. I was not suited. I watched a man die within a week of arrival week from brain cancer. They had him in a empty wing. I watched family lie to their elders. Never visit. Yell at me for what they could not bring themselves to do and relized that our society is no longer in any way prepared to deal with our elderly infirm. Sad. When you have already lost your marbles, most blind deaf and then your family locks you away and pays someone to watch as you die. And this is most likely my own future. I may just save my family the hassle when it comes time. I thought it a very funny story, a tad long. And sometimes your ryhme did not feel natural. But with a little editing and such, I think the charm and twist well worth the read. Thanks for sharing Judy. Good write. Julie D.D.
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R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 3 months ago

She wrung her hands around

She wrung her hands around and round and sniffed her pointed nose the lines give a dramatic appearance and display the skill. good
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

Shan

so sorry i missed your comment, late reply and thanks for reading. love judy
artygirl87

artygirl87

16 years 2 months ago

I still love this poem.

I still love this poem. Everytime I read it I get a little more out of it that I didn't see the time before.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

xxxxx

thanks L. i'm beginning to think that only those in the profession really appreciate it a lot of people not associated with alzheimers only see the sad side and cannot laugh through the pain. lol judy xxx
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Judd

My Mum was a nurse worked in the local hospital and the private hospital eventually ending up in pallative care with HomeCare ... she finished her career out in her late fifties got one year of retirement and left us ... she worked herself to an early grave ... but she loved the oldies had a heart of gold my ma ... she had one patient that i remember clear as day she lived in the same street as us was diagnosed with breast cancer and given 2 weeks to live ... well she lived 10 years after that suffered most of those years(as you can imagine she refused treatment) but still up until the last two years worked in her garden I was paid fifty cents a week to put her garbage out etc lol always sliding the money underneath the stack of fifty cent pieces she had next to the phone the poor old thing never realised all those years i was giving it back ... and when she died it was like losing one of our own wow your poem brought that out love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

thanks for reading JC

yes, those we look after become family. your mum sounds like a wonderful person. so sorry you lost her so early. love to you judd xxx