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The Doll
It’s called a High Care Facility.
A place where people go
when stroke or heart or Alzheimer’s
has stolen life’s libido.
Those ladies with cognition woes
can sometimes fret a bit.
They worry about their families
and think they have young kids.
In the homes for elderly ladies
some dwell in younger times.
And some OTs think maybe
a doll would be just fine
to keep them feeling useful.
And as something about to chatter
a child with big blue eyes might
help them settle better.
The therapist requested funds.
Four hundred dollars clear.
She said that some would benefit
from having a dolly near.
The boss thought it excessive
but as she couldn’t see a way
to veto transfer of the cash,
the young girl had her say.
Some staff, they were against it.
They thought it condescending.
Most even went so far as to
complain it was demeaning.
But the therapist was of the new school
and determined these things work.
And so without another word
the blue-eyed babe was bought.
The manager immediately
could see something was wrong.
She sat the doll, she laid the doll
but its big eyes watched her own.
“Its eyes don’t close,” she told the girl
who’d taken this giant leap.
“How will those ladies settle
when they can’t get the baby to sleep?”
Whoever they would give it to -
Peggy, Louise, Ingrid -
the doll just lay and stared at them
no matter what they did.
It was quite off-putting for the dears
as the manager had known.
The infant would not slumber.
Its eyes were always open.
They offered it to Mary Jane.
She pulled out most its hair.
They took it round to Nancy Lee
who really didn’t care.
Granny Sneet was terrified
and wouldn’t look its way.
And the manager knew too well
those eyes had had their say.
Not one lady wanted it.
They left it where it lay
in the foyer of the nursing home
and it stayed there day by day.
Until the time a visitor
into the crib did peep.
“Oh what a lovely little one,”
she said to Granny Sneet.
Granny shrugged her frail thin bones
and muttered under breath.
What she said God only knows.
One can only guess.
She wrung her hands around and round
and sniffed her pointed nose.
“I don’t know why they keep it there.
It is quite dead you know.”
Critiques
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
This is a serious but fun
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Rosina.I have worked
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
I could feel this well, I
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
sorry julie,
R.M.Shanmugam
16 years 3 months ago
She wrung her hands around
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
Shan
artygirl87
16 years 2 months ago
I still love this poem.
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
xxxxx
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks for reading JC