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Feb 22, 2010
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Stuffing
Maurice Mc Muffin ate nothing but stuffin’He wouldn’t eat meat fruit or vegHis mother went potty it turned her quite dottyAnd was tipping her over the edge, so She thought up a plan to provide the young manWith food both nutritious and yummyUsing her skill, and determined to fillThat unhealthy space in his tummy In her kitchen domain she vowed to remainWhilst weaning him off of his dietTrying all recipes and hoping to pleaseAnd praying that he would just try it One day she was cooking and when she weren’t lookin’Young Maurice crept in through the doorHe tasted some pud and he found it was goodSaying “Mum can I please have some more” Mum jumped for joy because her little boyHad found food that he wanted to eatNow he’ll scoff anything that his mother can bringAs long as it’s sticky and sweet
— shazbat, Feb 22, 2010
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Fleur MacDonald
16 years 2 months ago
You are a
shazbat
16 years 2 months ago
Fleur, it seems that we are
shirley harrison
15 years 12 months ago
oh john
shazbat
15 years 12 months ago
Cheers Shirl, but dont laugh
judyanne
15 years 12 months ago
i love this john