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Feb 22, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

life...

Live every second to the fullest,
Let your every moment be the best,
With all these beautiful moments build a happy nest,
Never ever do worry about the rest,
As life for every person is like a guest,
And for GOD alone knows what moment will be the next.


— Poem, Feb 22, 2010

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Region, Country: Karnataka, IND

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 3 months ago

mmm, why do you want my feedback?

I sincerely suggested you try working without the constriction of rhyme to free up your language and what do you post? A poem that does nothing but rhyme. And honestly Kavita, you could do much better. This is the sort of thing one can buy on cheap inspirational cards. Let your thoughts and ideas run free and let's see what you can really do. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
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Poem

16 years 3 months ago

i know jess…. but these

i know jess.... but these are the ones which i have written long back but posting them now on neopoet. From now o which ever i write ill try not to rhyme it ok :)