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Feb 22, 2010
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intoxicated
morning comes...
the long gypsy night
gathers her dancing skirts
flees with dark eyes,
my pen is leaking with blue skies
i am filled with surrender,
warm with memories,
the silver on Your
beard catching starlight, Your
lips utterly disguised in my heart's
rapturing
my pen spills over with intoxication,
drunk,
i write words to caress You.
the long gypsy night
gathers her dancing skirts
flees with dark eyes,
my pen is leaking with blue skies
i am filled with surrender,
warm with memories,
the silver on Your
beard catching starlight, Your
lips utterly disguised in my heart's
rapturing
my pen spills over with intoxication,
drunk,
i write words to caress You.
— Kailashana, Feb 22, 2010
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
breathlessly beautiful mummy
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Lovely words with true
Rob Graber
16 years 3 months ago
Lush
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Lush emotionality. Hmmm.
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Hallelujah, halleluljah! Anna dear much loved Anna.
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
my pen spills over with
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
My only enduring
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
How lovely is this
Cloudthings
16 years 3 months ago
makes me want to fall into feather down & revel in such sensatio