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intoxicated

morning comes...
the long gypsy night
gathers her dancing skirts
flees with dark eyes,
my pen is leaking with blue skies

i am filled with surrender,
warm with memories,
the silver on Your
beard catching starlight, Your
lips utterly disguised in my heart's
rapturing

my pen spills over with intoxication,
drunk,
i write words to caress You.






— Kailashana, Feb 22, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

breathlessly beautiful mummy

breathlessly beautiful mummy ... just a sigh before bed thank you I am going to sleep well me thinks love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Lovely words with true

Lovely words with true feelings of contentment. Rosina xena465
Rob Graber

Rob Graber

16 years 3 months ago

Lush

Lush emotionality--no pun intended! A strong write. :-,?
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Lush emotionality. Hmmm.

Lush emotionality. Hmmm. Why does the sky fit the earth so perfectly, Rob? Miles of smiles, Anna "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Hallelujah, halleluljah! Anna dear much loved Anna.

Ann of Norway Not only Barry will be seduced by this My Anna Kailashana ! You pen your love with ink of fiery black obsidian the silvered beard dipped in its ink writes back its love to you, with Gypsy songs barefoot among the dew surrendered, coveted and costly donned, with jewelled heart beats threaded one by one, to bless the Rosace of your feelings thus undressed your love once lost is now returned, and won. Hallelujah, halleluljah! Anna dear much loved Anna.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

my pen spills over with

my pen spills over with intoxication, drunk, i write words to caress You. I note the Capital Y and wonder if there is another to whom you also write? Judy
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Orphani

16 years 3 months ago

My only enduring

My only enduring disapointment is that I wanted to plastic off a room and have a melted butter ballon fight and she said no. She brings a smart balance to my excesses, but has a few of her own. Wev'e gone through six gallons of chcolate syrup and three lbs of shaved coconut. B
M

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

How lovely is this

the stars are not enough to share here for this lovely write Kaily magics02 xxooxxo "Determination Brings Success"
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 3 months ago

makes me want to fall into feather down & revel in such sensatio

Anna, this is divine, a wonder filled love poem that makes me want to fall into feather down & revel in such sensation... How happy I am for you dear one. & how happy for us that we get to read such lovely inspired work from you & know that something is bringing you joy & pleasure. Your sensuality is so rich & deep & it would be difficult, I think, to find a man who might come close to sating such depth... I can imagine the wonderful depth of Barry's complex being might just bring even warmer sweetness & fill you heart/mind/soul& body with temptations & explorations & a brilliant maze of fulfillment. Brilliant love is (& lust indeed) when it meets a mirror from a different space & learns to kiss loves damaged face... Healing is easy in the sunlight of sincere care. xxx to both of you Cheers Anni~ "Three passions have governed my life: The longings for love, the search for knowledge, And unbearable pity for the suffering of [humankind]." Bertrand Russell