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Feb 22, 2010
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just so
I am the rain you hear
between your heartbeats,
as the feather floating above
reeds, of time
I fly
with hands infinitesimal
I stroke the hairs
on the nape of your neck
to considerable highs
within mucus and membranes
I interweave,
sweeping specks
of lightning off my back
so, I am
still
all and nothing
a sum of wear
and the 'O' in one
— Seren, Feb 22, 2010
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Critiques
Bonitaj
16 years 3 months ago
Intriguing Jayne!
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Boni … surprised
CyberSpace
16 years 3 months ago
orsm poem should the comma
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
LOL yes thank you sweety …
buggles
16 years 3 months ago
very well done
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Buggles
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
hahaha… again we think
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
We gotta stop doing that eh
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
The "O" in One...
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Gee
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
‘so, I am stillall and
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Judy
Bonitaj
16 years 3 months ago
EUREKA!
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Fleeting is better than not