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Feb 21, 2010
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Sweet Wreckage
Old dinners litter
dining room table,
dregs of wine as red as
blood still staining goblets,
forgotten salad remnants wilted,
crumbs and crusts now stale on plates all
left behind in wake
of gentle urgent kisses,
water glasses patterned by
impatient fingertips
and taste of crimson lipstick.
Discarded clothing trails rumpled
through living room to bathroom,
black silk skirt and cotton jacket,
socks and stockings,
garter belt and panties
peeled off by teeth,
blue shirt and emerald blouse,
jeans and jockey shorts
lead to where soft rose petals
still cling pink
and glistening
to empty bath.
Soaked footprints climbing stairs;
damp towels
red and yellow halfway up
lie crumpled
left behing in haste
so hands could
eagerly caress:
rose petals have fallen
wet as rain from naked skin;
one robe carefully draped
upon the bannister,
another discarded
on upstairs floor
with more soft petals,
a terrycloth arrow
pointing to bedroom.
Within the confines of bed and sleep
scented candles are all melted,
burned away by
long length of joy,
air still tinged with odor of
burned wicks
honeysuckle
and sweet scent of
sensuous arousal
long satiated.
The room is chaos,
quilts and blankets
strewn on floor by
urgency
and body heat,
sculpted into
memories of
ecstacy
by long hours of
touch
delicious gasps
pressing lips on skin
slow easy rythym
clutching fingers and
shuddering release.
Yet the bed is quiet now
a single sheet
dewed with delight
covering sleep of satisfaction
breath and heartbeats matched
bodies still entwined
dreaming of spent passion
and passions still to come.
dining room table,
dregs of wine as red as
blood still staining goblets,
forgotten salad remnants wilted,
crumbs and crusts now stale on plates all
left behind in wake
of gentle urgent kisses,
water glasses patterned by
impatient fingertips
and taste of crimson lipstick.
Discarded clothing trails rumpled
through living room to bathroom,
black silk skirt and cotton jacket,
socks and stockings,
garter belt and panties
peeled off by teeth,
blue shirt and emerald blouse,
jeans and jockey shorts
lead to where soft rose petals
still cling pink
and glistening
to empty bath.
Soaked footprints climbing stairs;
damp towels
red and yellow halfway up
lie crumpled
left behing in haste
so hands could
eagerly caress:
rose petals have fallen
wet as rain from naked skin;
one robe carefully draped
upon the bannister,
another discarded
on upstairs floor
with more soft petals,
a terrycloth arrow
pointing to bedroom.
Within the confines of bed and sleep
scented candles are all melted,
burned away by
long length of joy,
air still tinged with odor of
burned wicks
honeysuckle
and sweet scent of
sensuous arousal
long satiated.
The room is chaos,
quilts and blankets
strewn on floor by
urgency
and body heat,
sculpted into
memories of
ecstacy
by long hours of
touch
delicious gasps
pressing lips on skin
slow easy rythym
clutching fingers and
shuddering release.
Yet the bed is quiet now
a single sheet
dewed with delight
covering sleep of satisfaction
breath and heartbeats matched
bodies still entwined
dreaming of spent passion
and passions still to come.
— Race_9togo, Feb 21, 2010
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neha raju
16 years 3 months ago
nic
Race_9togo
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you Neha
Race_9togo
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Ephraim,
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Wow The race to go roses and all.....
Race_9togo
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks magics
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Jim and race to go lol
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
16 years 3 months ago
Race_9togo
Race_9togo
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Mohammad,
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear JIm
Race_9togo
16 years 3 months ago
Thasnks Jayne
Race_9togo
16 years 3 months ago
“Laws and rules don’t