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Seven Beauties

they are such terrible beauties.
seven

eventually the grease paint wears thin, even the fairest
one of all
is but a naked face in the Time
of Locusts; the Nile is running red this year
your firstborn thought has already died
though she bears a living olive branch
in the Garden of Gethsemane

when the sun is
shining and the dew is calling
all rainbow serpents to the shores of Ireland

envy is a hard-hearted Lover
when the dark cloak of vanity prevails,
persistent consumptions swallowed like
heavy stones that were never tied to
your Mother

it steals from your brothers
and you remember your anger turning into
the wrath of God

killing your sister, Abel

(she was no he.)

and so you wrap your Neanderthal arms in sheepskin
to fool your blind father
steal the inheritance
that has always been rightly yours
waiting with a vulture's patience
in the Banquet Hall of the Prodigal's
Return, (a feast at the end of your lost labour)
emaciated with a truncated prima facie

your pride is gluttonous and your greed is endless,
you are lazy with infinity, dizzy with the bewitchment
of a thousand sordid lies
unbroken and spellbound

in the Hall of Splintered Mirrors
death blows ten thousand lightning rods--steel tipped
arrows

you sleep, do not notice

your heart is lusting under your sleeve and you never read poetry

your eyes are sealed shut
until the seventh scroll is found

floating on the surface of your own cesspool of contemplation.






— Kailashana, Feb 21, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

In my third incarnation of

In my third incarnation of writing poetry, my early writings were rewriting my Catholic background. Seven beauties refers to the 7 deadly sins http://www.deadlysins.com/sins/ Also to one of Lina Wertmüller's films...Seven Beauties... she is a female director/writer that is unparalleled in her time then and now, imo. She wrecked all the taboos of society with her gut wrenching unflinching films. Check em out. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lina_Wertm%C3%BCller
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

No speech from me can do justice to this poem,

Ann of Norway Oh it is I who is at a loss for words, no speech from me can do justice to this poem, it is classic literature immediately, something so profound and well understood that all I can express is wonder and admiration, I bow to you fair goddess of our site and in doing so touch the tip of you gown so finely spun that its glow reaches into the spheres and even the stars bow down. And I can call you sister, so honoured to have such a sister dear Anna Ann.
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

I like you conviction

I like you conviction portrayed in this poem...alas the bigger percentage of the world is guilty of most of the seven deadly sins. Some of us learn by mistakes and some don't the one(s) you speak of obviously hasn't. Poetry is very complicated and hard for some to understand...especially when the poet is highly intellegent and...I for one, has to work hard sometimes to sift through words written that I've never heard of before. I do have to use the dictionary a lot, but because I love writing poetry I try to understand how others write. Rosina xena465
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

I so would like to make an

I so would like to make an intelligent comment about this, but am at a loss for words. Your analogies (at least that how I read them) are stupendous. I admire your writing. I especially like the lines 'your firstborn thought has already died though she bears a living olive branch in the Garden of Gethsemane' - they convey some inkling of hope. Judy
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Orphani

16 years 3 months ago

A prophetic indictment for

A prophetic indictment for all. The bibles seven deadly sins Haughty eyes A lying tongue Hands that shed innocent blood A heart that devises wicked plots Feet that are swift to run into mischief A deceitful witness that uttereth lies Him that soweth discord among brethren Ghandi's seven Gandhi's Seven Deadly Sins Mohandas Karamachand Gandhi, one of the most influential figures in modern social and political activism, considered these traits to be the most spiritually perilous to humanity. Wealth without Work Pleasure without Conscience Science without Humanity Knowledge without Character Politics without Principle Commerce without Morality Worship without Sacrifice You bring new meaning to the seven. Love B
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

You are starting to freak me

You are starting to freak me out truely ~!~!~! last night I wrote one about the seven of something(not sins;) will post it when I have some energy ... love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x x
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SeekerAfterTruth

16 years 3 months ago

Oh man, oh man!

Oh man, the way this runs on into each of the seven was kind of awesome. Lends it some kind of systematic progression and some kind of chaos at the same time. Took me a while to get the bit about the seven deadly sins, although the Biblical references are somewhat difficult to get sometimes. (Sorry, bad with the Bible.) But what was really great that I noticed about this, I guess, was diction. Language, to me, was powerful, and that was kind of strange, given that I didn't notice any particular *striking* words that some poetry has, and yet the overall effect is just..."wham!". Sorry if this is a bit inarticulate. I've only recently returned to thinking. Regards, -Seek
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Roflmao… “I’ve only

Roflmao... "I've only recently returned to thinking." So very sorry to hear that. ;-) ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti