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Feb 21, 2010
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Time's sordid moments
takes it's toll,
adding a gravitational pull;
to a body
so weighed down,
his withered chin can touch the ground.
With pain so visible
on his face,
he lives without his wit and grace;
a life of selfishness
his major crime,
now sentenced to a duel with time;
and time's blatant
tenacity,
plus it's control over eternity;
reminds this man
how much it's cost,
for him to realize he's lost.
He wears
time's final wrath,
as he walks life's thorny path;
all alone
without a friend,
he walks the path to journey's end.
takes it's toll,
adding a gravitational pull;
to a body
so weighed down,
his withered chin can touch the ground.
With pain so visible
on his face,
he lives without his wit and grace;
a life of selfishness
his major crime,
now sentenced to a duel with time;
and time's blatant
tenacity,
plus it's control over eternity;
reminds this man
how much it's cost,
for him to realize he's lost.
He wears
time's final wrath,
as he walks life's thorny path;
all alone
without a friend,
he walks the path to journey's end.
— docmaverick, Feb 21, 2010
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Critiques
raskin
16 years 3 months ago
Sad description of a person
docmaverick
16 years 3 months ago
Great understanding, Raskin....
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Hey, Doc… tell the dude
docmaverick
16 years 3 months ago
Oh ! You ARE a feisty one !
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Beautiful…just so
docmaverick
16 years 3 months ago
Thank-you, xena....
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Doc
docmaverick
16 years 3 months ago
Thanx, Miss Jayne....
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
Poor guy
docmaverick
16 years 3 months ago
Thanx, Mark....