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Time's sordid moments
takes it's toll,

adding a gravitational pull;

to a body
so weighed down,

his withered chin can touch the ground.

With pain so visible
on his face,

he lives without his wit and grace;

a life of selfishness
his major crime,

now sentenced to a duel with time;

and time's blatant
tenacity,

plus it's control over eternity;

reminds this man
how much it's cost,

for him to realize he's lost.

He wears
time's final wrath,

as he walks life's thorny path;

all alone
without a friend,

he walks the path to journey's end.
— docmaverick, Feb 21, 2010

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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raskin

16 years 3 months ago

Sad description of a person

Sad description of a person with unmet needs in later life. Funny in a strange way, how selfishness ends up not meeting self needs. That's what I thought as I read this. A meditative poem. raskin
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Beautiful…just so

Beautiful...just so lovely...nice flow and tender feelings portrayed Rosina xena465
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 3 months ago

Thank-you, xena....

...I greatly appreciate your very generous comment. You always have such an eloquent way of saying your individual truths, and takes on things.....and that quality sets you, apart. Thanks again. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Doc

I felt a kind of desolation at the end of your write ... beautifully done as per the norm my friend but yeah ... alone sucks love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 3 months ago

Thanx, Miss Jayne....

...went for despondancy, if that's how it's spelled. Thanx for the encouragement. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
Mark

Mark

16 years 3 months ago

Poor guy

Hey Doc, nice. Do you think now he wears as opposed to so he wears rolls off the tungue a wee bit easier? Regards, Mark "I do not walk the earth and eat out of dumpsters, I'm not a bum, I'm beat."
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 3 months ago

Thanx, Mark....

...I appreciate the sugestion. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.