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Feb 20, 2010
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Soup
I’m playing in the garden making caterpillar soupI squish them with a stick to make a caterpillar gloopMix it with some water and then I stir till there’s a froth
Then I drink it from a jam jar, lovely caterpillar broth
— shazbat, Feb 20, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
If you drink the caterpillar
Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years 3 months ago
a riposte
shazbat
16 years 3 months ago
Methinks I will have to stop
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
LOL oh man ...