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Soup

 

I’m playing in the garden making caterpillar soupI squish them with a stick to make a caterpillar gloopMix it with some water and then I stir till there’s a froth

Then I drink it from a jam jar, lovely caterpillar broth

— shazbat, Feb 20, 2010

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Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

If you drink the caterpillar

If you drink the caterpillar broth (and don't turn the heat up a notch) realize your stomach's tied in a knot, it just might have something to do with the butterflies around that do jump & flit. :-) ~A
Ross Hamilton Hill

Ross Hamilton Hill

16 years 3 months ago

a riposte

I made some cockroach buns and had them for my tea. Then baked a plate of slugs and served them daintily on a platter made of tin that flies were crawling in.
Mark

Mark

16 years 3 months ago

LOL oh man ...

Me, I would have poured it on some vegi plants then watch them if they grow. Regards, Mark "I do not walk the earth and eat out of dumpsters, I'm not a bum, I'm beat."