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Feb 20, 2010
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Too Long?
As the crab sleeps gradual and gently
in the slow pot of cuisine,
do I sleep in the pot of the physical
forgetting where I have been?
Forgetting the wonderous awareness
of who I really am?
Forgetting, becoming too involved
and thus from true knowing banned?
Have I been in the pot too long?
The pot on slow burn.
My mind getting dimmer and dimmer?
Lethargy all I will earn?
Away from the sea of knowledge,
lost in sense sublime?
moving slowly towards unconsciousness?
Asleep in the pot of Time?
— judyanne, Feb 20, 2010
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Critiques
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Well I hope you don’t stay
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
A neat little ditty with a nice touch of the absurd
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Well, have you ever thought
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
OK guys. This on its own is
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
I’ve added a verse - does
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Oh yes Judy…I found it
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Just goes to show that one
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
The pendulum of the clock forever returning
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
I drink mine black, please
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
I'll turn them on if I have to learn to fly to do so,
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Snow!!!!! Dancing
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Take care they shine only when they will!
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Judyanne
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks, Jayne-Chloe.The