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Feb 20, 2010
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ON SHIT, ON WATER, ON MAN.
ON SHIT, ON WATER, ON MAN.
Blown by wind we land at random,
on shit, on water, on man,
not master of our destiny,
tossed and turned
in undecided manner,
thrown and crushed,
built up, melted down,
used as weapons,
shields, a home;
no knowledge,
save the thoughts we learn,
coincidences' unsteered wisdom,
rules,
we meet,
we separate, relate a while,
until one day our life expires
just giving way to other flakes
that fall in other years.
The knowing does not slake our fears
it adds to their declaim
our tiny crystal shapes, so lovely
don't end up as saints
We paint a picture pure and white
you burn me up in starlight
late at night
and when the sun comes out to blaze
we leave without complaint.
— Nordic cloud, Feb 20, 2010
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Stefan
16 years 3 months ago
wow
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Ann of NorwayThank you both
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
See that glow on the horizon
talkingcat
16 years 3 months ago
I love hearing about the
whitetea
16 years 3 months ago
okay. its settled i am going
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
This brought a smile to my
Bonitaj
16 years 3 months ago
That's what I like!
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Are we really just like snow
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Ann of NorwayIn Australia it
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
Never fear...
sampatrik
16 years 1 month ago
Great info.I like all your
Musclebuilding
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shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Ann