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Dusk

On the edge of endings
warmth begins a slow decline
to cool evening,
streets emptying
of all the rush
and wrack of living.

Time slows upon
a final depth of turning world
before the darkness
finally arrives,
a moment long as geologic eon,
as brief as falling raindrops,
winding river-slow through
the alleys and the driveways,
breath stilled on edge
of patient precipice.

Along the roads
the waiting houses
begin a yellow glow
of welcoming,
pressed shining through
the glaze of windows,
beacons of contentment
guiding home their
weary owners eager
for the quiet within.

Around the curves
of dimming streets
the steetlights come to life
in crimson light
that grows into
an orange warmth
to replace the dying sun.

Beyond the curbs,
within the evergreens already
dark with ending day,
leaves dissapear into the gloom
while small birds concealed
unseen within
sing themselves to final roosts,
as slivered moon rises up
curved and sacred out across
the slant of roofs
and first hints of pinprick stars:
night has not yet come
but dusk has now arrived,
and it is time to go.




— Race_9togo, Feb 20, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Really beautifully written.

Really beautifully written. I love the constant flow of images. I must read some more of your poems later. Rosina xena465
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Rosina

Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Jim

You poem was literally an image in my head ... when I was studying for my degree I lived on top of a hairdressers salon ... and I had a little balcony out the front and this reminded me of sitting out there on summers nights watching the streets empty and it was like they(the streets) went into suspension for an hour or two until the night people come out ... this was in sydney ... wonderful write powerfully conveyed images ... well done' love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 3 months ago

-Thanks Jayne

"Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
R

R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 3 months ago

expressive and kept my

expressive and kept my interest in reading it. shan
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Shan

Glad you liked it. "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

I’m not sure how much you

I'm not sure how much you updated this one. It's has great imaginary and sends me pictures of the theme like a true poet. It's a pleasure to re-read it...Brilliant. Rosina xena465