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STICKLER

STICKLER A middle aged woman stood in front of a tillDisagreed with the total amount she had to payAnd declared, ‘I am a university computer’, rightly soWhen the inputs were added, the machine was wrong Self praised perfectionist whose brain worked overtimeWith digits like a matrix, programmed to finding faultsHer fingers danced on the keyboard like an excited childTo work out a code that will lock out any game off sleeves In their proper places, everything meticulously primedNothing else is good enough, except laid down by herAs the crow flies through air to a distant land by modesMade to strengthen the curves by steady flapping of wings The perfect scheme you hatched yesterday has maturedWith rudeness and starvation used as twin weapons of warTo humiliate and provoke the weak to anger, unlike the crowYou are rewarded with a crooked shoulder, a side effect of pride





 
— t. reflexion, Feb 19, 2010

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

another poem that has gone 4

another poem that has gone 4 weeks without comment Ask yourself why and do something about it. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years ago

The mirror of my works

Thank you very much for your comments and observations. Sorry, I was out of town and out of reach. I will do something about them, or get someone to drill me in the technical aspect of writing poetry. I appreciate your interest and I remain deeply committed to you. Best wishes. T.