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returning

find me
as never found forever

and love fell from the sky
 gently  drifting in  thoughts
downward through dreamers
probing the outer distances
of separation as if a science

it was then I was banished to
the center of Orion's belt
to forget

rain among the music of leaves
understood the sky's mystery

I do not know how to remember
such imperfections as me
when your eyes adore such miracles
of light

 lost in clouds I fall
for only then am I allowed to return

You hold sunlight
nearer than the morning
nearer than the flower it's color

there is a practicality in dying
into the returning dust of equality
the moment ends - the dearest season

 what is lost?
the smell of the last jasmine?
did you find it in the young field?
or now in the time of their memory?
or never?

to smell the lost flower
to dream the last dream
I return
— Orphani, Feb 19, 2010

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Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 3 months ago

and what a homecoming it shall be!

Ah Barry! You capture descriptions so simplistically, so profoundly well - "You hold sunlight nearer than the morning nearer than the flower it’s color" To be in the rays of one of your loving glances must be enough to make the flowers blush! ;) Nice write! Boni B
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Orphani

16 years 3 months ago

Flowers are not allowed in

Flowers are not allowed in poetry anymore, but between flowers and stars I'm lost. Thanks for your gracious words.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

My darling Barry, your voice

My darling Barry, your voice is rich and your heart is an open flower, your mind is a beautiful thing... You and I, We and Us, They are ever present, ever found in this constant gardening. ;-) Love. p.s. nice revision!
O

Orphani

16 years 3 months ago

This poem is about life and

This poem is about life and how we live most deeply when we love, and open our selves up to this beautiful gift, that we forget in the passing of time, and the prisons we make within when we close the doors of our hearts. In this I feel you love. B
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Well put dear Barry

Ann of Norway So well put, then all our faculties are alert and alive, we fuction as human beings at our top potential and all the world glows with its joy. Sigh! Ann in the north.
O

Orphani

16 years 3 months ago

Love is a simple concept so

Love is a simple concept so often missunderstood. Yet through it the jasmine fragrance can find a home and a palistinian can hug a Jew.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Like the music on the leaves in the rain,

Ann of Norway I read and reread this and I didn't want to leave it, I wanted to read it again and again, that something special like the music on the leaves in the rain, like the sound of the snowflakes reaching the ground, like the magic of the silent woods, you have found and captured in your poem here and I come again and again to experience the intangible feelings you arouse, those that I cannot describe, beautiful Barry, just beautiful. Ann.
O

Orphani

16 years 3 months ago

The most fundamental law of

The most fundamental law of phisics states that matter cannot be created or destroyed, yet at some point this was not true - allowing existance, and never found forever, as two lovers find each other through the miracle of love, but are held on a phisical plane untill they reach a higher spiritual connection. We banish our truest selves from the beauty of life when we forget that love is as rare as the last jasmine.Your mountain tells you this in one drop of melting snow. For that drop will become a cloud, and that cloud a spring rain.Love B
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ziggy

16 years 3 months ago

“lost in the clouds i

"lost in the clouds i return for only then am i allowed to return" i like to read some poetry aloud and this sounds sweet when i do , i really like this one cheers and well done , AGAIN ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ZIGGY
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Kal said this needs some

Kal said this needs some light I agree I am hoping my vote does the job ... love to you Barry wonderful write my friend ... sigh love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
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Orphani

16 years 3 months ago

I am moving in and out of

I am moving in and out of styles in an experimental sense and find this one the most natural for me though I want to explore other possibilities. Like a kid in the candy store I have big eyes. It seems we traded votes as "serandipity" was a deep well of a poem. Love, and, a free a cool sunny morning. B
the_fool

the_fool

16 years 3 months ago

very dreamy

lilty, light and full of love. different from some of the stuff i've read from you. very sensitive. hope she's worth it :) t_f
O

Orphani

16 years 3 months ago

Trying to keep out of a box

Trying to keep out of a box and testing the parameters of different styles of poetic expression. This is one of the more popular styles. B
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear B

Congrates on spotlight ... so good to see this one shining where it belongs :) love Jayne-Chloe
O

Orphani

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Jayne and the same

Thank you Jayne and the same to you I know you must be ashamed of being so popular by now.The fact is if the poetry isn't good the popularity soon dies off. Love B
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 3 months ago

Way to go

Gentle and loving open and light a true poetic delight Seabhac
O

Orphani

16 years 3 months ago

Glad you like this piece.

Glad you like this piece. The funny thing is the styles I like best are the least popular, and vice versa. love B
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DimondDivinity

16 years 3 months ago

wow profound read,

wow profound read, captivating i like how the words flow simplistic yet so advance beautiful write!! Keyanna