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Feb 19, 2010
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returning
find me
as never found forever
and love fell from the sky
gently drifting in thoughts
downward through dreamers
probing the outer distances
of separation as if a science
it was then I was banished to
the center of Orion's belt
to forget
rain among the music of leaves
understood the sky's mystery
I do not know how to remember
such imperfections as me
when your eyes adore such miracles
of light
lost in clouds I fall
for only then am I allowed to return
You hold sunlight
nearer than the morning
nearer than the flower it's color
there is a practicality in dying
into the returning dust of equality
the moment ends - the dearest season
what is lost?
the smell of the last jasmine?
did you find it in the young field?
or now in the time of their memory?
or never?
to smell the lost flower
to dream the last dream
I return
as never found forever
and love fell from the sky
gently drifting in thoughts
downward through dreamers
probing the outer distances
of separation as if a science
it was then I was banished to
the center of Orion's belt
to forget
rain among the music of leaves
understood the sky's mystery
I do not know how to remember
such imperfections as me
when your eyes adore such miracles
of light
lost in clouds I fall
for only then am I allowed to return
You hold sunlight
nearer than the morning
nearer than the flower it's color
there is a practicality in dying
into the returning dust of equality
the moment ends - the dearest season
what is lost?
the smell of the last jasmine?
did you find it in the young field?
or now in the time of their memory?
or never?
to smell the lost flower
to dream the last dream
I return
— Orphani, Feb 19, 2010
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Critiques
Bonitaj
16 years 3 months ago
and what a homecoming it shall be!
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
Flowers are not allowed in
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
My darling Barry, your voice
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
This poem is about life and
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Well put dear Barry
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
Love is a simple concept so
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Like the music on the leaves in the rain,
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
The most fundamental law of
ziggy
16 years 3 months ago
“lost in the clouds i
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
It’s good to hear from you
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Very lovely poem…deserves
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Rosina so glad to see
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Great the O one!!
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
Hi, Mona thanks for taking
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Kal said this needs some
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
I am moving in and out of
the_fool
16 years 3 months ago
very dreamy
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
Trying to keep out of a box
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear B
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you Jayne and the same
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Way to go
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
Glad you like this piece.
DimondDivinity
16 years 3 months ago
wow profound read,
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
So glad you liked it and