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Longish No

Longish No!

The road commenced aeons ago,

Now in the midst we traverse,

Towards the eternities of time.

Where times’ shall end

One can’t in poetry rhyme

It’s a longish one endless,

Where did it commence

To where it shall go,

It’s not with in my life’s dominion

Nor imagination,

It’s a longish one, no!

 

 

 

My comment alongside again

There is nothing new

In this world

We came along,

A longish way in time

 

We write poetry

Just to rhyme,

Then when its time

We ride away.

 

Its part of a long story

Some one,

A pair wrote,

In seminal ink

Long, long

Times’ way,

Aeons away

 

If you may say,

We shall continue

For ever the same old seminal game

That only we all shall

For millennia’s hence play.

 

 

 

 

 

— loved, Feb 19, 2010

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16 years 3 months ago

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My reply sir There is nothing new In this world We came along, A longish way in time We write poetry Just to rhyme, Then when its time We ride away. Its part of a long story Some one, A pair wrote, In seminal ink Long, long Times’ way, Aeons away If you may say, We shall continue For ever the same old seminal game That only we all shall For millennia’s hence play. Longish No! The road commenced aeons ago, Now in the midst we traverse, Towards the eternities of time. Where times’ shall end One can’t in poetry rhyme It’s a longish one endless, Where did it commence To where it shall go, It’s not with in my life’s dominion Nor imagination, It’s a longish one, no!