Seren

Feb 18, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Trading leather

You brushed my cheek
I felt a crackle of lightning
spear a ripple,
to the tip of my tongue
a premonition of taste
made my mouth water

when your leather
encircled my frame
in the warm scent of you
I was driven with wild abandon,
to hunt

again

like a true huntress
I stalked you in leather
bound you with strips of my love

but alas the hunt is no fun anymore
when the game gives up so easy

and the hunter becomes the hunted

— Seren, Feb 18, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

Critiques

CyberSpace

16 years 3 months ago

no comment love hubby

no comment love hubby xoxoxoxox p.s I refuse to comment on the grounds it may incinerate me lol

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

yo… snakey-poo…. but

yo... snakey-poo.... but what a way to go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! eh? love, mummy

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

I cant type snakes answer to

I cant type snakes answer to you its not fit for public consumption pmsl dirty bird he is lol love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe and snakey-poo

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Pmsl ya wosssssss dare ya to

Pmsl ya wosssssss dare ya to say what you were thinking hahaha ...love and hugs wifey x x x x

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

The twist in the tail of a leather jacket

Ann of Norway The twist in the tail of a leather jacket that ripples its black bulk and turns on you just as you are taking it off. I felt I wanted a little more bfore the end as it was getting interesting!! Love Ann

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Ann

sometimes when I write these I leave a little to the imagination lol so if I left you wanting more I will try and supply you with more next time lol my singing teacher always said leave them wanting more I try to apply it to my poetry sometimes lol ;) biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe

J.Thomas

16 years 3 months ago

Sound like maybe a role

Sound like maybe a role switch? when the hunter becomes the hunted. It happens so often; more than i ever thought.

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

More often than not you hunt

More often than not you hunt something long enough it will turn on you ... I am a country girl and have seen it more times than I care to think about lol kind regards Jayne-Chloe

Orphani

16 years 3 months ago

Your imagery is exquisite

Your imagery is exquisite enough to die for. Especially that first stanza.Erotically sensual expression of a woman's need to indulge her dominant side in the confines of this loving poem. This ones for lovers to share.Love and I miss yous. B

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Barry

Thanks so much for your wonderful comment this one was written with the thought in mind to share slices, I guess you could say .. am working on another one for my partner and its taking longer than I thought but writing poetry thats not trite and gooey sentimental shite is not easy lol love to you and yours Jayne-Chloe x x x

the_fool

16 years 3 months ago

made me sit up

agree with ann, though. i'd keep this one and delve deeper into it later, this could entertain much longer

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Fool

I have finished this one ... the plan was to leave you wanting more lol and I have achieved that so the next thing in the next poem is well you will see lol when I get back to it ... glad you thought it entertaining Jayne-Chloe

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

We are a fickle lot are we

We are a fickle lot are we not? Always desiring what we think we cannot have, then quickly losing interest if it comes to easily. Aussie, aussie aussie, oi, oi, oi. Great write as usual. Obviously hubby's not the suspicious type? (Smile) LOL Judy

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Judy

Most of these poems are about hubby ... and no hes not the suspicious type but hes a jealous of whats his I guess you could say hes a great support to me and knows that not everything I writes based in fact lol though lots of these have slices of reality lol Ill leave that up to the readers imagination to decide which is the case hahah OI OI OI sooooo good having more aussie women around not enough of us lol love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe

old friend of kurt

16 years 3 months ago

Great poem!!

Great poem!! I like the true, real to life feel to this. The sensual nature that prevails throughout the wording scheme. I think the imagery is superb in this, and you express so very well those passions pertaining to wild erotic emotion. Highly compelling, quality poetry. Most sincerely, old friend of kurt

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Friend of Kurt

I know your the friend of Kurt ... but do you have a name of your own ... or are you Kurt ?? lol ... thanks for the kind comment on this one its not finished yet I still have a few little tweaks but will get to that later lol love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x