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Silly Synchriosity

For a minute of your moments
I would like to please explain

you'll need to know, where my thoughts go
otherwise I'm just insane.

I must say that I can't pretend
and I'm not allowed to feel

I'm such a fool, for the golden rule
my life is so unreal.

It's nice to know exactly where
I stand in all of this

if it don't fit, you must equit
and the charges he'll dismiss.

So for now, you have a clue
that this poem's quite allright

you'll soon find out, so don't you pout
fate decides what is your plight.

Now, you'll probably have to say
this poem's all nonsense

with the black lagune, you get a looney toon
we can sneak in by the fence.

If it were up to me you'd know
my political position's clear

we're in the "mix", and they have tricks
so don't believe everything you hear.

So, with a weary arm I write
what I think I know is fact

this world of clay, will have it's day
but, remember clay can crack.
— docmaverick, Feb 18, 2010

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Lunegirl

16 years 3 months ago

I think your poem is very

I think your poem is very good, leading us in the natural to flow to a great ending, and isn't it just so true!! you've tackled a meaty subject lightly and with dare i say jaded humour?? vix Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 3 months ago

Thank-you, my dear Madam....

...jaded humor is my specialty. Kidding aside, thanks for reading AND for commenting. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 3 months ago

I enjoy your synchriosity........

and the rhyming at the time aint so bad either!! haha just a bit of my "FADED" humor...Doc...I enjoyed this write as with all of my favorites....all yours!! of course. Antoinette Mari