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Good flow, interesting subject, life experiences mould our personalities, hopefully for the better. I would love to live in "the ancestral home" We live in an imperfect world, "chasing our own destinies" But there is hope and a way out "fresh books with new histories." for all that we have now will be a thing of the past. Wonderfully written, you have a gem for an imagination. Keep it up.

Great poem. The path you walk will bring you insight..........break the prison of the mind, free your spirit.........for outside the mind, lies wisdom.......your birth right.......well done.

"Made separate from One with a colourful burst" - beautiful- yes its very colourful ;-) "Our job’s to gain knowledge, and with know-how and wisdom to master our own energy. To steer our souls in the path chosen for them" Dare I say - with love?? Enjoyed it alot, thanks for posting.

This is a phenomenal piece of work!! Loved everything...the content, the imagery...flow's darned near perfect!! See, now you've done what Rosina did...I have to go read everything I can find by Judy!! hahahaha!! BRAVO!! Dusty

Please be patient...I promise I WILL get the hang of things...=(

For you Judy the stars do matter. A beautiful poem written with heart, soul and dedication to the art of poetry. Of which you belong. Rosina xena465

Ann of Norway Her in Neopoets, we find others of like vibes, like that thought and its very exciting to have found friends after all the years of knowing only the few. Oh what pawns we are in the scheme of things tossed this way and that by all influences and all learning and never really fitting in as we are SUPPOSED to, so THEY say. And yet we do sometimes, occasionally in our lives, experience ourselves in the right place at the right time, in the right mode of travelling through this life, but these are usually short glimpses of the right way and we pale as we find it wasn't the right way after all, as we none of us know what that is. The middle way, ah yes eastern thought, living in the shadows too is a way, that way one can keep ones own integrity and bloom even if its under the great spreading trees, we bloom in our own quiet ways and are content, or not, its our lot. Another poem so very well written and so philosophical, I liked it a lot Judyanne. Love from Ann

Your a woman after my own heart ... I loved this one and the flow was beautiful well done ... aussie aussie aussie oi oi oi lol ;) good to have another aussie round the place love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x

so I will just add some technical crit. Given your meter, the stress gets placed on the final foot in- to master our own energy. as we each chase our own destinies. holding fresh books for new histories. Which makes them read a bit forced. ok? Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

your metric form puts the stress on the final foot so all words like energy, destinies and histories are out. although note it works with the double syllable rhymes creation/recreation. Get my drift? Perhaps half rhymes or assonance may be the go. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

I absolutely LOVE this pen 'for me' it tells the Journey of the Soul,The Circle of Life and our journey to reaching the "ALL" of it. "Our job’s to seek knowledge, and with know-how and wisdom to master our own energy. To steer our souls in the path chosen for them by the one who knows better than we." As an energy worker, I can relate to this, as it's very close to my heart. We must all learn to process energy correctly to find true peace within. As we walk down our path in life, there are many bends in the road, many detours, that lead us astray from our soul purpose. The soul will always let us know when we have gone astray, and we will once again find the right path and continue on our way. I would have phenomenal myself, but it's already taken....lol It is a beautiful, outstanding pen and I am so honored that you have shared it with us. Love, Light and Rainbows, Venus xxxx