Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Feb 16, 2010
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
The Earths Can Shake & The Stars* Can Create
I'm surprised to say
a little more everyday
the strife of life gives way
So i realise why many pray
yet ill deny these lies to my grave
like a spy behind enemy lines
trying to feel great
emotions build up within the mind with help of the spine all day
but ive realised to save my dimes
and write some rhymes to feel safe
its asinine sometimes when the flies think their too sane
these big guys with size act like its a game
like digesting fries, unwise for the bodies flood waves
and many deny the right of the gays
why these ties?
they not fucking your butt anyway
my mind can reline finds in my neuronal gates
synapses responding in line within my membranes
And I’ve lived enough in this time to know the grind of life is insane
Many tonight wont see the next day
So much fright can fill the play
But really what's a crime atop these tectonic plates
I guess nothing but sour limes can make ya shake
and being kind can make you feel above state
but the signs within the mind can negate
but these feelings can subside just by eating steak
were reading a thin line
were animals for fucks sake
but shit everythings inertwined and unwilling to negotiate
a symbiotic relationship is hard to find
and its selfish in the first place
so as humans with "smart" brains
lets rewind the times and start to face
this slime that we must change
like obama had tried to shine in his political race
but instead left blind
due to earthquakes
so many left behind
life aint sweet as cake
im always wishing for sublime
yet left half baked
still letting the sunshine
help stop me from decay
so lets work together
a prime time
like a relay
make beutifull sounds like a chime
and be brave
cause I can see the stime
giving me the rage to start a rave
loathing to stop hines so we can all get by
a little more everyday
the strife of life gives way
So i realise why many pray
yet ill deny these lies to my grave
like a spy behind enemy lines
trying to feel great
emotions build up within the mind with help of the spine all day
but ive realised to save my dimes
and write some rhymes to feel safe
its asinine sometimes when the flies think their too sane
these big guys with size act like its a game
like digesting fries, unwise for the bodies flood waves
and many deny the right of the gays
why these ties?
they not fucking your butt anyway
my mind can reline finds in my neuronal gates
synapses responding in line within my membranes
And I’ve lived enough in this time to know the grind of life is insane
Many tonight wont see the next day
So much fright can fill the play
But really what's a crime atop these tectonic plates
I guess nothing but sour limes can make ya shake
and being kind can make you feel above state
but the signs within the mind can negate
but these feelings can subside just by eating steak
were reading a thin line
were animals for fucks sake
but shit everythings inertwined and unwilling to negotiate
a symbiotic relationship is hard to find
and its selfish in the first place
so as humans with "smart" brains
lets rewind the times and start to face
this slime that we must change
like obama had tried to shine in his political race
but instead left blind
due to earthquakes
so many left behind
life aint sweet as cake
im always wishing for sublime
yet left half baked
still letting the sunshine
help stop me from decay
so lets work together
a prime time
like a relay
make beutifull sounds like a chime
and be brave
cause I can see the stime
giving me the rage to start a rave
loathing to stop hines so we can all get by
— mdehe, Feb 16, 2010
Share this poem
Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
I know I hace read this, and was sure I comented,