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M

midnight

touch me once more
with your ghostly embrace
brighten the love
that now shadows my face
dance in the glow
of my candle light
fill the room with you presence
that i may hold you tonight
— mardy3, Feb 16, 2010

Critiques

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 5 months ago

Ilike it

A lot of feeling in such a short poem. Regards Roscoe..

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