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My Dad and Me
He walked with me through the wheat fields
when I was very small.
He showed me how to rub the ripe heads
when the plants were golden and tall
so magically seeds would appear from the chaff.
It was something I’ll never forget.
An aroma of memory,
of a time of standing amongst the harvest
of millions of wheat seeds, and my Dad and me.
He stood with me under the Southern Cross
when the sun had gone to bed.
A blanket of starlight above us
stretched for forever over my head
reaching back over time and space.
It was something I’ll never forget.
Experiencing eternity,
and a time of standing under the cover
of millions of candles, and my dad and me.
We swam in the Great Ocean.
Between his legs I dove.
He taught me to do the ‘dead man’s float’.
And to teach me to swim he strove
to show me frog kick and then to float on my back.
It was something I’ll never forget.
Learning how to swim with ease,
lost in the joy of floating between
millions of water drops, and my Dad and me.
He woke me in the early hours
to view it on TV.
The reception, it was pretty poor
and ‘snow’ made it difficult to see
brave men thousands of miles from home.
It was something I’ll never forget.
Those men making history,
dancing up there upon the moon
while watched by millions, and my dad and me.
He read to and with me and explained to me often
titbits of data and facts.
He was awed by science and nature.
And taught that we paid for our acts
when we destroyed creation with technology.
It is something I’ll never forget.
The passing on to me,
well informed insights and common sense
through millions of wisdom whits, from my dad to me.
I sat at his service, devastated and lost.
His face no more to see.
I sit by his grave and talk to him still
about wheat, astronauts and TV
while I remember the harvest the ocean and stars.
They are something I’ll never forget.
Those marvellous things that he taught to me
absolve the grief and melancholy
of millions of tear drops, for my dad from me.
Critiques
IKnowNoBox
16 years 3 months ago
Greetings
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
What a beautiful comment
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Just brilliant...
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
I have to admit that this
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Mine too..
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Most beautiful poem for your dear Dad.
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Ann for your
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
There is very little more
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
I was a fortunate child - I
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Both of them loved nature, loved walking in the woods,
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Just lovely
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Mona you are lucky to still
R.M.Shanmugam
16 years 3 months ago
how sweet and smooth the
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Never enough about you Ann,
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Judy
Dustyverse
16 years 3 months ago
Oh Dear......
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Jayne-Chloe and Dusty