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IKnowNoBox
Feb 16, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Glib Offender

not ascared' no not at all
not of dreary locations
" No Trespass"?
an  invitation to explore

venture forth on a dare
not afeared' no not at all
"Caution High Voltage"
an experiment to conduct

irrational risk for a thrill
not hindered, no not at all
"Slippery When Wet"
a natural amusement ride
— IKnowNoBox, Feb 16, 2010

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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raskin

16 years 3 months ago

Ha, ha your last line was

Ha, ha your last line was funny. Great set up but did you mean invention or invitation? Did your mean expirement if you did great play on words because when I first looked I saw experiment. I enjoyed reading. raskin
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SophieHannah24

16 years 3 months ago

I enjoyed this very much.

I enjoyed this very much. Creativity and....attitude is very appealing.
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VAMPIREBLONDE

16 years 3 months ago

Very creative play on

Very creative play on words..and one of your best writes :)
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IKnowNoBox

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you

Now I am in a quandry as to whether to change it back, a consistent benifit of Neo.. I shall await the consensus. In red ink, Dabbler Without Box
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

HMmmmmmm I dont know I like

HMmmmmmm I dont know I like expirement ....but its your baby another great read ... Love and hugs Jayne-Chloe