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Feb 16, 2010
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luna ruins, pale runes
i dreamed of a landscape as white as milk,
your pen was poised above me
with the strength of Michelangelo
bearing down,
you were drawing me with ivory fingers
and i was heavy with alabaster breasts
the roses had turned to stone
and the marble bled,
i was disfigured with irony
all dreamers are fools
and fools are only dreamers
when poetry is a Samurai sword
and the structure of Self
falls
like an empire, like the doom
of devastation
on a prophet's tongue
the chalice of love is a poison i drink
until i am drained,
pale as the moon,
light as a feather.
— Kailashana, Feb 16, 2010
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Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Mum is this the one I read
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
I could get into
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Omg your muse is amazing …
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
My muse obliges me in 4D.
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
Poetess
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Mark, too sweet, tout de
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
This poem is brilliant
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you for reading, your
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
Anna,its always a pleasure
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
In the light of the moon the marble of statues,
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
We women of years, are not
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
I cannot think of what to
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Mercy Bowcup, or
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Me too...
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Awww shucks, Ms. Rosina,
IKnowNoBox
16 years 3 months ago
Greetings
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Boy Dabbler, are you a sight
IKnowNoBox
16 years 3 months ago
I have been..
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
we go round and round
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
….And now you see it, now
whitetea
16 years 3 months ago
Theres definitely a sadness
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Yup! That it is. All
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
When the moon rolls the
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
Your poetry always deals out
Esker
16 years 1 month ago
I remember Notre dame cathedral in Montreal