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On the other side of the door,,,

In the girls bathroom
you hear gossip about gossip
boys and weekend plans,
The latest fights and worries
the passing of homework to copy.

But a door away is another bathroom
and every girl has to wonder what they say.
On girls stalls we have rumors of hotties
the tales of tramps, and top five uglies.

But on their stalls whats written?
Do they do their drug deals
and ready for fights,
or do they just party around and act like usual clowns?
in our four minute break,
Girls wonder whats going on behind the closed door.

So many questions, but to girls,
behind that door is a secret.
Guys never tell, nor do we ask;
Cause in Middle School there are obvious rules
to last a day you must stalk
to make it out
alive.
— ANC1996, Feb 15, 2010

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Region, Country: Florida, ZZC

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Shakespeare, Homer.

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 3 months ago

I could tell you, but then I would have to kill you.

stalk? strange use of the word but I see where you are going with it. This paints a good word picture but lacks a certain oomph to me. Maybe make more of the image of a creature prowling cautiously through a dangerous jungle. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
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bella1

16 years 3 months ago

WOW!

never thought of it that way adri !great! now im scared to go to the bathroom! jk thats a really good poem adri one of my favorites because its something every one can relate to. And i totally understand whos in the bathroom (a bunch of preps! jk) Love it!! Peace and darkness<3 <3Anabella
ANC1996

ANC1996

16 years 2 months ago

(:

Im actually typing a second part of this poem as i type this. ITs cause to days ago: I. Saw. the. Guys. RESTROOM! LOL. Love and Spacemen, Adri (:
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

pervert!

Cheers, Jess, “The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue.” Emma Goldman
ANC1996

ANC1996

16 years 1 month ago

:P

Amm nottt! It was suprisingly clean though... XD