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Your sexuality

Love,

Lust,

Sex,

Infatuation

And crush,

All lead to the same central place,

In more than many ways.

But paths taken by each one

Are different

So let each one

Decide one's own, choosing

Then you will know

What is what?

Some will err,

Some’ll refrain

But love shall always

The central theme

For ever, as ever

So remain.

— loved, Feb 15, 2010

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Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 3 months ago

I liked this!

The topic, the layout all of it.... except for one small detail! Why not change the grammar at the ending as follows: But love shall always (so)remain the central theme - for ever and ever. Thank you Bonita j
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

thanks

thanks for ur advice
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

THANKS

THANKS FOR READING MY POEM RGDS ISTAN
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Atticus

16 years 3 months ago

Loved,

It's not just that I agree with the content of your poem, though I do, I like the way it reads as well. congrats on this effort. nice work. -Nathaniel
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

THANKS

THANKS FOR THE TIME YOU TAKE TO SPEND READING AND COMMENTING AND ENCOURAGING ME U R AND MUST BE GREAT ISTAN