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Feb 15, 2010
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Deep Realizations
I'm surprised to saya little more everydaythe strife of life gives waySo i realise why many prayyet ill deny these lies to my gravelike a spy behind enemy linestrying to feel greatemotions build up within the mind with help of the spine all daybut ive realised to save my dimesand write some rhymes to feel safeits asinine sometimes when the flies think their too sanethese big guys with size act like its a gamelike digesting fries, unwise for the bodies flood wavesand many deny the right of the gayswhy these ties? they not fucking your butt anywaymy mind can reline finds in my neuronal gatessynapses responding in line within my membranesAnd I’ve lived enough in this time to know the grind of life is insaneMany tonight wont see the next daySo much fright can fill the play
— mdehe, Feb 15, 2010
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weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
a fibe wrie