My Chains Are Gone

i'm glad that you at this point in your life.............well done

A great affermation in the making, the end was a bit of a drop off. Who do you want to be? Mark "some are born to sweet delight, some are born to endless night"

The first time I did that my life became a continuous misery. But when you start doing the work it begins to get better. I think it is correct when said "God is a pervert" and in relation "Look, but don't touch. Touch, but don't take. Take but don't swallow." (The Devils Advocate) Follow your desires that nobody gets hurt and that is doing the work heavenly ;) bye for now, Mark "Do not ask me about poetry, I am just a poet"

You got it and stick to it. Great gal Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"

Is half the battle. Find your way, accept and be happy with yourself. That is the whole secret my friend. Well done. Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin

...wow, that's a short but complete poem (for me)..i like it, its self realization..love the read!

I needed to ask the question - Who am I? And move from there as I think Rett implies (I think) but you probably already have :~)>]/\__ Mark You are the leaf, I am the tree. Cling onto me, I'll grow into you. http://www.neopoet.com/node/36042

the most true thing i have ever read. i understand compleatly