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Glitch

  Permit this a glitch glance away from slight in desperation many a matter unraveled note loose trinkets thoughts askew pall mall habits engaged such a scramble blurt passage of ramble a knot so intently tasked take it as it is with bolts unsecured parts a' rattle an exercise in rickety spare verse assembled with skitish pen Drafts left to later dates lack in formal attire missed parts perhaps presented with quirky smirk in need of a tweek and polish
— IKnowNoBox, Feb 15, 2010

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Ink Dragon

16 years 3 months ago

Dear David,

It's great to see a new poem from your pen. I liked this one a lot, it spoke to me of the times when we struggle to create something and realize with a sinking feeling that we are not "there" yet. By the way, I think this is our first conversation in 2010, so a very happy (if belated) new year to you, my friend! Yours, ~Nina
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 3 months ago

great to see a post, mate

something I can truly relate to and anything presented with quirky smirk is ok by me! Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible