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Our Magic Moments

The glowing embers
of what keeps us both alive,

is the genius of passion
shooting us into overdrive,

swallowing doubt's shadows
in the distant, through the mist,

as the dew dries
I, so gently grasp your wrist;

guiding you to join me
and as our auras become one,

silken moonbeams
the pre-curser to dawn's sun;

and your grace flows
as our bodies find a way,

ignites us boldly
as night's cover lets us play;

then we become one
under night-time's canopy,

with a whip of wonder
that sets our spirits, free;

lending credence to
that pure magic that we feel,

and I remember
to embrace, and cherish moments that are real.
— docmaverick, Feb 15, 2010

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About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 3 months ago

Nes Pa'?

Thanks. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

I love the rhyme...

And the poem is great, and your cat is beautiful. I should introduce your cat to my wee pet rat Zak...agg! Maybe not. It may eat my wee friend!!!! xena465
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 3 months ago

Thank-you....

...xena ! Yes...he IS a "meateater"! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
AW

Antoinette Mar…

16 years 3 months ago

Just a few writes behind....

I enjoyed this very much...and can identify ...when remembering when your Dad was with us....enjoyable...Doc...thanks as usual..........................Antoinette Mari
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Very Nice Doc

That's all I can say Doc, surely inspiring write of yours. Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"