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Feb 15, 2010
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Our Magic Moments
The glowing embers
of what keeps us both alive,
is the genius of passion
shooting us into overdrive,
swallowing doubt's shadows
in the distant, through the mist,
as the dew dries
I, so gently grasp your wrist;
guiding you to join me
and as our auras become one,
silken moonbeams
the pre-curser to dawn's sun;
and your grace flows
as our bodies find a way,
ignites us boldly
as night's cover lets us play;
then we become one
under night-time's canopy,
with a whip of wonder
that sets our spirits, free;
lending credence to
that pure magic that we feel,
and I remember
to embrace, and cherish moments that are real.
of what keeps us both alive,
is the genius of passion
shooting us into overdrive,
swallowing doubt's shadows
in the distant, through the mist,
as the dew dries
I, so gently grasp your wrist;
guiding you to join me
and as our auras become one,
silken moonbeams
the pre-curser to dawn's sun;
and your grace flows
as our bodies find a way,
ignites us boldly
as night's cover lets us play;
then we become one
under night-time's canopy,
with a whip of wonder
that sets our spirits, free;
lending credence to
that pure magic that we feel,
and I remember
to embrace, and cherish moments that are real.
— docmaverick, Feb 15, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
ooooh la la!~A
docmaverick
16 years 3 months ago
Nes Pa'?
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I love the rhyme...
docmaverick
16 years 3 months ago
Thank-you....
Antoinette Mar…
16 years 3 months ago
Just a few writes behind....
docmaverick
16 years 3 months ago
Thanx, Toni....
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Very Nice Doc