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Feb 15, 2010
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a devotion to planet earth
We have to rebirth, the soul of this planetand pray it be cleansed and gentled evermore,but as nails keep piercing hands reach to smooth across her scared shroud It has to be worshipped like the apostle to the apostles,but with a feast of celebration everydaydressed in her finest, she must be read and chronicled by scribes of all ages If her spirit cries out for a easing, for the torment that embroiders across and through her linen,rent from the abuse and torture of her kinhaving sewn by the hands, that marred her our sacrifice,
will take Millenniumsto ponder at the fibers of her cloth,for in the beginning, as the interweave of her shroudwe started to spin,Great wheels through time
our redemption,
to sew a forever
that rebirths from our torments
will take Millenniumsto ponder at the fibers of her cloth,for in the beginning, as the interweave of her shroudwe started to spin,Great wheels through time
our redemption,
to sew a forever
that rebirths from our torments
— Seren, Feb 15, 2010
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CyberSpace
16 years 3 months ago
By far one of your best
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
But this is only the first
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
I love your expansion, Lady
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
And its black … your
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Mother Nature...
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Rosina
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Depth of the woven
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Liz
adjei agyei-baah
16 years 3 months ago
An attention well drawn,the
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Sinnbadd
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
I give you a shower of golden rain.
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dearest Ann
Stefan
16 years 3 months ago
wow
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Stefan
arja
16 years 3 months ago
..beautiful, like a tribute
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Alone
Venus x
16 years 3 months ago
Totally AWESOME
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Venus
bjp
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Jayne-Chloe,
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Brian