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Feb 15, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

tasty island...

"

Look, look its a tasty island,
Where there is no sand,
Chocolate streams.....,
Where everyone screams for ice creams..,
Creamy skies..,
Where strawberry flies,
Milk shake falls,
Which is not of kwality walls,
Of course everyone would like to stay,
But not possible as its just a dream of a day.

."
— Poem, Feb 15, 2010

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Region, Country: Karnataka, IND

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DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

Oh that struck a sweet tooth

Oh that struck a sweet tooth Poet, how very sweet. Who can argue with a island of desert and candy. To bad the dream is but a little fluff in the middle of the milky way candy bar of a day. Are there quotations at the begining and end for a reason? Seems unnessesary. Very cute and creative. Thanks for sharing. Julie D.D.
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Poem

16 years 3 months ago

thank you...

Hi.. Thank u for ur comments... And actually there are no quotation marks.. they could not delete them as pasted it direcly from my blog..
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 3 months ago

So that's where the quotations marks come from on your poems!

After you post the poem in you can then delete them. The works you have already posted you can edit, just click on edit under the title. Is this poem written for children? If so the mis-spelling is even naughtier kwality quality Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible