MY LITTLE VALENTINE'S SONG

Valentine you day so fine,

for lovers twining knots sublime,

if you are mine and I am yours,

what need for days with one red rose,

we have our lives to breathe, enhance,

so take my arm and we shall dance,

through all the Valentine days;

and end up dressed in greys,

but with that rosy cheek,

that your have kissed each day, each week,

for all our lives, for all our lives,

for all our lives, my sweet.

— Nordic cloud, Feb 15, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

Critiques

raskin

16 years 3 months ago

Delightful,

Delightful, beautiful sentiments. Well written. raskin

mirky62

16 years 3 months ago

Valentine's Song: Lovely sentiment,excellent read.

mirky62 Is there a typo or an omitted word in the third to last line.Very enjoyable poem.Thanx

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

Splendid sweet Ann, so sweet I am feeling the sugar rush. I love Candy. I love Valentines. I love a good love story! Thanks for sharing your song with us, our wonderful free spirit and friend from Norway!! Have you been keeping track of the olympics? The short track star Apollo Ono is on of my favorites and a local for me! I love all the Ice skating to! In fact Vancover, where they are holding the olympics this time, is just about 120 miles north of where I live. I WISH I COULD GO! Oh well, I get to see lots on TV. Till next time dear Ann! Julie D.D.

Proprietress o…

16 years 3 months ago

hearts and songs

I lost all chocolate on that day no candles and no huge bouquet but your sweet song of valentine has warmed this freezing heart of mine for all my life, for all my life for all my life, my Ann

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

no valentine be mine no sun,

no valentine be mine no sun, no sun shining no hearts no flowers no tickles no bryan bowers no fancy no free no I, no thee, no we. Four days later, I find I even missed your valentine. Sniff. Hug. ~A http://www.bryanbowers.com/music.html (click on # 22, St. Anne's Reel)

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

I love you all for your attention and for dancing..

Ann of Norway I have to thank you all, I love you all for your attention and for dancing with me on Valentines day, I had no valentine either, I gave them to you, but none for me, never mind I am not so worried by such, I am not one to wish to make a fuss but I have only had two valentine's gifts in my life, they were when I was 15 and when I was 18, the first was my first love, the second I didn't find out was a school boy who watched me fencing and he was the very first and almost last to give me flowers at all, 12 carnations, red of course, and I was speechless and almost fainted and terribly bothered that I didn't know who George was. Until a year later when I found him sitting next to me on th top of a double-dekker bus, I might have given him a little kiss of thanks but there were no more meetings. The first gift was a hand-decorated letter declaring his love for me, he has just got married after watching his wife die, and is very happy. I am glad for him. That's my valentine's day story's, so far!!!!! Love to you all from me.