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When will it dawn?

When will it dawn?

 

All my life I wasted

The youthful years,

Educating the masses.

All my life I sacrificed,

In teaching the basics,

Of what is all life all about?

What’s the use of a brain?

If we let it go down the drain.

Why of what use is our body,

If body language

We can’t decipher,

What’s the use of a poet like me?

If it still does not dawn,

That poetry is just

A sentimental  out flow,

Of love,

Of emotion,

Of sexual and stress expulsion.

Poetry is the love that does bind

A poet like me,

Who writes poetry of all kind?

Where on this earth,

Will one like me you’ll  ever find?

 

I cover from the youth,

Teenagers,

Lovers,

To decrepit old people

Ah! When will it dawn,

That my next name

Will be Dawn?

— loved, Feb 14, 2010

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

Educating the masses. Who do you think you are ?

Your false mosesty and petualant comments on other poems show you have delussiobs of grandiour. Not bloody guru or genius, Trite and repettive. "That poetry is just A sentimental out flow, Of love, Of emotion, Of sexual and stress expulsion. Poetry is the love that does bind A poet like me? Who writes poetry of all kind? You really think you are better than your are. Some are same,barely litertate trite over and over a agains, Listen to the people who try to help. You attacked me when I tried to help so uou wiil get no further feedback from me. Yor are writing vicimised, martyish comments on other poems. There are plenty of places on the net where you will only get the "very nice dear" comments you really want. Go there..You never listen to feedback.you delusion is truly pathetic, your userdoe does not mske you youare. statement wheres you say you are oved byall are jusu plainly silly. Loved by silly, vapidfools who could noeven rigth fro hallmark. You are very mediocre and tunnel visioned, take risk grow. and getting over the victimised martyridm. Believe it or not i care. conect. groeing. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible