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Time

You’re locked away at this moment

in a corner of my world.

A photo protected by angels

near an urn your ashes holds.

Our years here together are over.

(We only ran up a score.)

The Ancient One, He called you home

and in Time we’ll meet no more.

 

But the ever-stream of Consciousness

has many riverlets.

Although you’ve taken another way

we still are closely connected.

And in that stream of Consciousness

you’re forever close to my heart,

‘tho we may be made physically separate

our souls are never apart.

 

For the whole is there forever

and the doors to experience divine,

labelled in various and sometimes strange names

such as Space, Dimensions and Time.

We will all step from Time to Consciousness,

and in that golden tide

we’ll meet again some wonderful now.

Because it was only Time that died.

 

— judyanne, Feb 14, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

Wonderful post for

Wonderful post for Valentine's Judy, So sad and longing, but full of love. Thank you for sharing! I thought it very heart wreanching and full of respect for what is around us all, but not for us to see or feel. Julie D.D.
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Oh my sweet one

This poem touches my heart in a way I can not explain right now. Lovely and so glad to have met you tonight. Look forward to your book out and to seeing around here more often. Glad you came to chat, come back they have some very nice sessions, just look up on the schedule, they are really good learning tools and the people in there are all great1! Kudos on your write Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Nice to have met you too.

Nice to have met you too. thanks for checking out my poem - thanks for your lovely comment. enjoyed the chat but i'm too slow typing and found it difficult to keep up with so many, but will definitely be back there. Judy
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R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 3 months ago

A photo protected by

A photo protected by angels near an urn your ashes holds. ho!shan
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Brilliant...

Love the content and rhyming. well written Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Judy

Its well written and heartfelt sorry I missed any of your writes till now ... Nice to see another aussie in the ranks ... welcome ~!!! I look forward to reading more from you kind regards Jayne-Chloe
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Dustyverse

16 years 3 months ago

Simply beautiful...

The imagery here left me almost speechless...and THAT doesn't happen often!! Perfect!! Dusty
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

This from you, you who’s

This from you, you who's use of imagery is astounding, is a great compliment. I'm so glad you like my work Dusty. Thanks. Love Judy