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whitescatter
Feb 14, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Isolated Me

the roomside got some hell on it
the venom of insanity haunting the chill to my feet
whenever i'm drowned in this ocean of hate
i see the eccentric sky always disturbing my faith

alone in a world of darkness and frost
and the world i live is the place i hate the most
wiping these bloodsheds, hiding my tears
lonely is really me tyo whom nobody cares

SIN, SADNESS,HATRED-this is what it is
this is my whole life means..
and DEATH!! the only escape for this!
only i fear to end up in such ghostly distress!!


— whitescatter, Feb 14, 2010

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Region, Country: Laguna, PHL

Favorite Poets: William Shakespeare And the NeoPoet Family

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DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 3 months ago

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I found this to be full of passionate remarks where time and death coincide within each other. And of course loved this line, "only i fear to end up in such ghostly distress!!" well done!
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Ann of NorwayThe rhythm

Ann of Norway The rhythm needs to be pulled in a bit "me tyo whom "? "bloodsheds," no s ever. "this is my whole life means.." this doesn't make sense, what my whole..... "the roomside got some hell on it" don't understand this! I still like its content but it needs sorting out a bit, don't you think? Love Ann