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You are the one....

You are the one for whom i always cared,
Told everything without being scared.
You are the one very precious...,
Who's heart seems to be very spacious...
You are the one without whom I can't live,
But for you I'm the one with whom you can't live
— Poem, Feb 14, 2010

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Region, Country: Karnataka, IND

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 3 months ago

touching, kavita

Just a couple of spelling/grammar things You are the one [for] whom i always cared, Told everything without being sacred. [sacred spiritual or scared?] remember we talked about you trying some poems without rhyming? I would love to see them Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
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Poem

16 years 3 months ago

hmmm..

Yes jess i do remember.. I had written this poem before i had an chat with you.. so from henceforth i will take care not to rhyme.. ok..:)